济南雅思培训学校助您提升雅思写作

  • 发布时间:2023-12-27 14:10:58,加入时间:2022年08月26日(距今1023天)
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写作高分句型

一道看起来很贴近生活话题的题目,仔细思考观点时发现,切入点都特别小,很难写出逻辑的完整性。今天帮大家写了个7.5和9分对比,主要是词句语法方面的分数哦。大家可以学习一下用词的区别,灵活运用到其他话题中~最近有机考的小伙伴也可以速速准备起来啦!

7.5 分表达

The absence of this knowledge may result in children adopting detrimental financial habits, such as overspending, excessive reliance on credit cards, and failure to save for the future, all of which can lead to long-term financial difficulties.

9分表达

Conversely, the lack of such financial literacy skills may lead to the development of harmful financial habits, including but not limited to excessive spending, over-reliance on credit cards, and the failure to save for the future, thereby increasing the likelihood of long-term financial difficulties.

2023-12-27

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